Friday, April 5, 2019

Twice Taken

Photo Credit: Ro Molina


"Which w-way.......do you..... w-want it?"  My words, stilted yet insistent, escape between choppy heated breaths.   Need to know.  There are several different directions he could take us.  His fingers dripping with vanilla scented oil, he has me anticipating what I know to be delicious options on our private, carnal sexual buffet.  Visual lubrication prepares our way.

It is imperative that I give myself to him exactly as he desires.  That ravenous moment when I need my life mate to possess me, to be inside of me.... somewhere.

"I love watching you squirm on my hand."  Stop.  Don't stop!  Stop!!  I am  too close.

"How do you want me?" From behind? 

His gravelly bass bedroom voice. "I want you down on your knees."  Blood flow blushes my ears.  Oooh, do I like it when he knows exactly what he wants.

I hold him -- smooth, hot, hard. First in my hand, then in my mouth.  Salt. Soap. Spicy.  Tongue concave, warmth in my throat kisses his spongy head tenderly, invitingly.  He growls.  I give brief vibrating hums in response.

Without warning, I find myself on our bed again, on my elbows and knees, both giving and receiving in honor, ready to partake.  He claims his rightful, primal place behind me as he presses up against me.  Smooth, hot, hard.

I like when he knows what he wants, but I love when he changes his mind.




My first attempt at flash fiction.  234 words.  The writing challenge was to write an erotic story less than 500 words using the sign image at the top of the page. 

14 comments:

  1. This is fantastic Windy, and hot! You are such a talented writer, keep writing :)

    Hugs
    Roz

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    1. Hi, Roz! Thank you! I will keep writing. Thanks for your support! Hugs, Windy

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    1. Hi, MorningStar! Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! Hugs, Windy

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  3. Windy,
    You had me panting and wondering! Keep those prompts coming. Then act them out!
    Meredith

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    1. Meredith,
      Laughing....I could act them out, see how it goes, and get another post out of it, maybe! HA! Thanks for your encouragement. Sorry (not really) that I made you pant, but I did post it on a non-golf day, so hopefully your main was nearby if you needed him. HA! Hugs, Windy

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  4. Niiice! .... a tough assgnment ... or maybe not ... sometimes fiction is close to fact ;)) ... hugs! ... nj

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    1. Hi, NJ! Thank you. It was a challenging assignment and the rules/suggestions are more involved than I explained. Apparently one can partially rate oneself according to the word count..... 500 is good, then 300 is better...... etc..... some people can apparently do it under 100. Then are are words to avoid using such as "the, and, now."

      Regarding fiction/fact.... Yes, it's about sex, my husband and me, and it had to be erotic so, those things are always true. Connect that to the picture of Road Signs though? That was challenging. The editing part is the part I enjoy the most and where I think I am growing as a writer.

      I'll be following Flash Friday and will see how it is done! I don't know when some these bloggers sleep! They write all the time! Amazing! Hugs, Windy

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  5. Windy, you aced this challenge. Great job!
    Rosie xx

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    1. Thank you very much, Rosie! I appreciate you reading and encouraging me! Hugs, Windy

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  6. Wow! This was a wonderful read! Thank you!

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    1. Hi, Laurel! I'm happy that you let me know you thought this was a good read. Thanks for reading! Hugs, Windy

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  7. Fanning myself, that was hot! Great job!

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    1. Hi, Blondie! *Points the fan in your direction* Thank you for reading and telling me it worked. haha I hope you're feeling better over there. Hugs, Windy

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